Saturday, September 21, 2013

Book Opening

Hi, Posting the first couple paragraphs of the draft of a prologue of a book I am writing. Please given comments and tell me if you want more.

Prologue
                In the dark alleyway, two teenagers walked side by side away from the busy street and into a dark alleyway. Their features were shadowed by the light behind them. On the opposite end of the alley, another teenager barely a few years approached them. This older teen had light brown hair and had a black cap that was pulled down low to cover his eyes. Both of his hands were tucked deep in the pockets of his black leather jacket. Around his neck hung a leather cord with a bronze charm in the shape of a hawk that gleamed dully. They all stopped in the middle and turned so that their backs faced opposite walls. The light now shone on the younger teens revealing a girl with semi-long black hair and a boy with slightly long, white-blonde hair. The older boy pushed back his hat to reveal his dark green eyes.


                Without saying a word the girl hugged the brown-haired boy and the younger boy soon following suit. Both of them returned to their original position. No verbal greeting passed between any of them. The only sound was from the cars driving past on the street.  The older boy looked into the eyes of the other two. The three of them spoke volumes of words with that look. Younger teens broke the eye contact and the older boy gently grabbed their shoulders.

               As his did, his eyes changed to a dark brown for an instant and an intricate tattoo on his left hand glowed softly. Then bits and pieces of the ground rose and formed an intricate bracelet around his right wrist. As the older boy dropped his hands the younger teenagers responded to his act with the ground. The younger boy’s eyes flashed from blue to gold as tiny flickers of flame started to appear out of nowhere in a pile of garbage lying in the alley. A tattoo on his right wrist glowed. The girl’s eye changed from black to silver and her tattoo on her left wrist shone as a small stream of water came from her hand and put out the fire. Both of their eyes flashed again as a two ribbons appear out of thin air making a small hissing sound. One ribbon was pure white and seemed to be made of light. The other was made of darkness which made it rather hard to see in the dark alleyway. Both of the ribbons twisted together and wrapped around the bracelet of the older teen. The ribbons both sunk into the bracelet leaving it the same as before.
               
               Then the older boy hugged the younger teens gently and handed them a small package that he had produced from his jacket. He walked off and disappeared into the busy street on the opposite side of the alleyway. The eyes of the girl followed the older boy until he disappeared. The younger boy’s attention was fixated on the package in his hands. He flipped it over to find a card taped shut on it. The boy tapped the girl’s shoulder and pointed at the card. The girl picked it up and opened it. Inside was a handwritten note:

Dear Kirikaze and Aydin,
This is probably the last time you will ever met. This is my parting gift to you. I do believe it is time for me to give this to you. Hope you survive until our next meeting if we met again. Remember that you are never alone. He and I are always watching you.
From, Akumu

               The girl and boy didn't say anything for a while. The girl suddenly noticed a mysterious person at the end of the ally and shook the boy out of his stupor. Without saying anything else, the boy tucked the package and card into the leather satchel he wore. Both of them started to run away from the street.

This is only the first half of the prologue. Please comment if you want the rest.Currently the Book is called"Shadow Story" by me please give me ideas for title. 

-Kirikaze

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