Showing posts with label Shadow Story. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Shadow Story. Show all posts

Saturday, September 21, 2013

Book Opening

Hi, Posting the first couple paragraphs of the draft of a prologue of a book I am writing. Please given comments and tell me if you want more.

Prologue
                In the dark alleyway, two teenagers walked side by side away from the busy street and into a dark alleyway. Their features were shadowed by the light behind them. On the opposite end of the alley, another teenager barely a few years approached them. This older teen had light brown hair and had a black cap that was pulled down low to cover his eyes. Both of his hands were tucked deep in the pockets of his black leather jacket. Around his neck hung a leather cord with a bronze charm in the shape of a hawk that gleamed dully. They all stopped in the middle and turned so that their backs faced opposite walls. The light now shone on the younger teens revealing a girl with semi-long black hair and a boy with slightly long, white-blonde hair. The older boy pushed back his hat to reveal his dark green eyes.